{"id":3640,"date":"2015-04-06T03:59:08","date_gmt":"2015-04-06T10:59:08","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/?p=3640"},"modified":"2015-04-06T04:17:28","modified_gmt":"2015-04-06T11:17:28","slug":"linkedin-headline-tip-stick-to-the-facts-avoid-superlatives","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/2015\/04\/linkedin-headline-tip-stick-to-the-facts-avoid-superlatives\/","title":{"rendered":"LinkedIn Headline Tip: Stick to the Facts, Avoid Superlatives"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A student in one recent Profitecture class sent me an interesting question, so I thought I post the answer here.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;How do you find the balance between marketing yourself and sounding full of yourself?&#8221; she asked. &#8220;I think there is a thin line.&#8221; She attached a screen grab of a LinkedIn member who described himself as a &#8220;Remarkably Brilliant IT Professional.&#8221; \u00a0My reply:<\/p>\n<p>I agree with you that &#8220;remarkably brilliant&#8221; is a pompous and inappropriate term to use except in a humorous context. If the profile is clearly written to be funny, then I suppose it&#8217;s okay, but I expect that most people who read a description like that would presume that the person is not someone they want to work with. I looked up the profile you sent me based upon the distinctive terms in the headline, and the profile was clearly not intended to be funny. I don&#8217;t think this guy is doing himself any favors.<\/p>\n<p>The best advice I can give is never to use superlatives when talking about yourself. For example, I never call myself an &#8220;expert,&#8221; even though some others do. Use terms that can be defended by facts. I do refer to myself as a &#8220;veteran&#8221; technology journalist because I spent 23 years in that field. I think that&#8217;s a fair characterization. Don&#8217;t call yourself &#8220;award-winning&#8221; or &#8220;best-selling&#8221; unless you have facts to support that statement. Talk about facts: your accomplishments, interests, motivations and preferences. Talk about what excites you and what kinds of people you like to work with. Those are all fair game, as far as I&#8217;m concerned.<\/p>\n<p>There are some gray areas, of course, such as &#8220;energetic,&#8221; &#8220;disciplined,&#8221; &#8220;committed&#8221; and &#8220;determined.&#8221; My recommendation would be not to use terms like those. They don&#8217;t mean much and they can&#8217;t be proven. Lots of other people use them, so there&#8217;s nothing distinctive about them. Try to use words that are distinctive but also factual. Tell a story one of your great accomplishments. It&#8217;s perfectly okay to say what makes you proud; just avoid saying what makes you great.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A student in one recent Profitecture class sent me an interesting question, so I thought I post the answer here. &#8220;How do you find the balance between marketing yourself and sounding full of yourself?&#8221; she asked. &#8220;I think there is &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/2015\/04\/linkedin-headline-tip-stick-to-the-facts-avoid-superlatives\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"spay_email":""},"categories":[539,348],"tags":[53],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/pTy95-WI","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3640"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3640"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3640\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3643,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3640\/revisions\/3643"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3640"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3640"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gillin.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3640"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}